Feedback

Here is the feedback from we got from the first showing of our music video to the class.

6/6 said that it definitely had potential and 1/6 said why isnt it on MTV already???

I was very happy with this because we only had just finished our first draft of the music video because we changed our idea at the last minute! I am now going to edit the video a lot more to make it exactly how we want it.

The elements that work:

• Good editing
• Good effects - could add more!
• The dancing
• Nice shoes and props
• Lips
• Animations
• Split screens
• Good make up
• Split screens when getting ready
• The ballet dancing

Elements that need developing:

• Bit too short
• Clearer cuts
• Some shots are too long
• Writing on the mirror
• More split screens
• Clothing on bed sequence repeated once too many

Overall I am very happy with the feedback we gained from our class and teacher and I will put all the corrections into place.