6/6 said that it definitely had potential and 1/6 said why isnt it on MTV already???
I was very happy with this because we only had just finished our first draft of the music video because we changed our idea at the last minute! I am now going to edit the video a lot more to make it exactly how we want it.
The elements that work:
- Good editing
- Good effects - could add more!
- The dancing
- Nice shoes and props
- Lips
- Animations
- Split screens
- Good make up
- Split screens when getting ready
- The ballet dancing
Elements that need developing:
- Bit too short
- Clearer cuts
- Some shots are too long
- Writing on the mirror
- More split screens
- Clothing on bed sequence repeated once too many
Overall I am very happy with the feedback we gained from our class and teacher and I will put all the corrections into place.
